"I think he you have made a good start Wanda. Three things catch my eye, and I would suggest having a re think on :
The concrete foundation or walls don't add anything and I think are a distraction, I would replace with more of your wonderful…"
"Very good idea Wanda, I have carried out similar exercise in a park near our home, but struggled to produce suitable scenes at home. You have done very well here nice greens and a interesting path taking you through.
welcome Ian! i hope you learn what you need from this site. if you want really great help, post a painting for critique and discussion. the artists here are very forthcoming with helpful hints. very willing to share their knowledge. it is a friendly place. great support group!