Home Town Ice Cream

For some of you who wanted to see my "ugly stage" of the process. Well...here ya go!
The under paint is mostly a thin layer of oil. Now to add thicker layers and adjust values, more detail, and highlights. I'm seeing too much yellow ocher in the top of the building, need to change that. The values aren't too bad, but need to bring out the ice cream shop to more focal point. (strong light). There will be more detail inside it on the left like the right side of the shop windows. Suggestions are always highly appreciated.

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Comment by Art on March 19, 2017 at 9:41am
Mark that's excellent
Comment by Mark S Ward on March 15, 2017 at 7:43am

You are always welcome Mary, I learn a lot from you and everyone else also.

Great suggestion Susan! I will get some different colors in there. Thank you.

Comment by Mary on March 15, 2017 at 7:16am

Thanks for sharing Mark - it's really coming along and I appreciate your process check with us  which is helpful for my learning.

Comment by Susan G. on March 15, 2017 at 7:14am

Mark it is incredible.  You have already seen, with your artists eye, the main adjustments needed.  The only suggestion [from a total rookie!] would be to adjust the clothing colors on the ladies.  Maybe something on one of them, other than blue.  I strive to be able to sketch to your level and then carry thru with such a wonderful painting!

Comment by Mark S Ward on March 14, 2017 at 8:07pm

Thanks Marion!

The black frame is just a sign for sundaes or something. It was just in the photo and kinda liked it. Also thought about putting a one way street sign here too, pointing to the shop.

Comment by Marion on March 14, 2017 at 6:40pm
Wow Mark! Love this, really enjoy looking at it. Really like the colours too. Your lettering is amazing. Just a question, is the Black frame, facing us a window, or is it that a sign? Just something that I don't understand in relation to window of the ice cream store, is this a window looking into the shop? I love the inside of the shop, the servers, stools. Great painting.
Comment by Mark S Ward on March 14, 2017 at 6:00pm

Thanks Wenda!

You are a wonderful painter! and your skills will allow you to do anything. You seem like the one who holds their breath and just jumps right in there, so you've already got what it takes.

Comment by Wenda Spooner on March 14, 2017 at 5:41pm

nothing "ugly" here. thanks for sharing :) cant wait to see the changes you make. i just love these kind of scenes. my painting skills, wont allow such things lol

Comment by Sarah Irland on March 14, 2017 at 5:32pm
Mark, your
"ugly stage" is looking pretty good! Thanks for sharing your process. It sounds like you have identified the next steps. Looking forward to the finished painting.

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